Page one: [link]

Haha! Page two! Told you I'd get it up.... eventually. This is page two of my kingdom hearts comic. ITS AKUROKU. Meaning this is SHONEN AI. If you have a problem with yaoi or the pairing or the way I draw or anything else, I ask you to please not comment. Don't even comment about how its good but you don't like the pairing. I DON'T CARE. Go flame someone else. I will eat you... seriously. just don't do it...

Now that thats out of the way, its not heading for rape! DX I swear its clean! Everyone tells me Axel looks like he's about to rape Roxas, but that's not where this is going... Well I'm not sure where this is going... but still! I don't draw man parts so don't worry, there will be no rape...

THE COMIC HAS BEEN NAMED! This is called Shattered, thanks to my buddy who does not have a deviantart account. Oh, and I'll be putting up the cover page asap. Its got a lot of detail and I'm still not so great with my tablet so I'm sorry its taking so long. DX I'm only 15! What do you expect!?

And now I must make some appologies. To the person who I dedicated this too because you inspired me with your photography, I'm sorry, I had no idea you hated akuroku XD there will be some Zemyx later for ya. To all you people I left waiting, I'm sorry, I'm swamped with work =_= I'm doing the best I can here. To all you people forced to look at this lameness, I'm sorry I can't draw for beans T.T and to all those people annoyed by the smudges, I'm NOT SORRY!!! You can blame the jerks at my school. You try drawing in math class when you're the only freshman in a class of seniors. >.< gullible was NOT written on the ceiling when they took my papers!

Anyways, all comments and IDEAS are very much appreciated. I need some ideas REALLY badly. And suggestions too... like if the pencil look is annoying, should I change to inking? Seriously, gimme some feedback people. much <3 2 u all~